The Fallen One
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| Subject: Ryoushi Kuuhaku- Iwagakure no Sato Sun Aug 29, 2010 7:12 pm | |
| Name: Ryoushi Kuuhaku Alias: Age: 16 Gender: Male Height: 5'11'' Weight: 132lbs. Appearance: - Spoiler:
Race: Hispanic/Japanese Hair: Black, Spiky Eyes: Onyx Body: Tone, athletic. Ethnicity: Tsuchi no Kuni Personality: Ryoushi has a very short fuse when it comes to getting insulted. He will lash out on anyone who dares to insult him. Other then that, he’s quiet when he talks, sneaking in some swear words here and there only to men. However, he has a more sweet and sincere personality when talking to women, and has often been called a “ladies man.” He’s calm and quiet, but it seems whenever he does open his mouth, it’s never anything nice, and just more insults. Village: Iwagakure no Sato Title: Genin Special Titles: N/A Missing Ninja Class: N/A Karma: 0 Alignment: True Neutral Renown: 0
Rank: E Experience Points: 0 Bloodline: Uchiha Element: Katon Fighting Type/Style: Genjutsu (Mastery) Sub Fighting style: Genjutsu Mastery Inventory:
- x12 Kunai
- Short Sword
- Wire
Kekkai Genkai: N/A Combat Styles: N/A Bloodline Limits: N/A Jutsu Total: 3 Jutsus: - Spoiler:
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Rank: E Type: Support Requirement: none Description: This basic academy Ninjutsu technique is expected to be used by all ninja. Once the user forms the respective hand seal, the user is able to mold his/her chakra to create a non offensive clone. The clone does not possess the same amount of chakra as the user and cannot engage in physical activity. This technique is used mainly to confuse the adversary, trained Shinobi (Mainly C-rank and higher) are able to detect a clone instantly and may often tend to avoid attacking it.
Name: Kawarimi no jutsu - Body Substitute Skill Rank: E Type: Support Requirement: none Description: It's implied in the name. The user switches his or her body with a plant, animal or anything for that matter. This is used to escape dangerous situations such as many sharp projectiles being flung at the person. Sometimes The user can damage their opponent with this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu - Tranformation Technique Rank: E Type: Support Requirement: none Description: This basic ninja skill is expected to be mastered by all ninja. The technique allows the user to use chakra to change the physical appearance of themselves or parts of themselves to anything of their liking. The transformation is not able to last forever and lower leveled ninja may have trouble controlling this technique. Missions Completed:
- D-Rank:
- C-Rank:
- B-Rank:
- A-Rank:
- S-Rank:
- Total:
Background: 17 years ago in the land of Konoha a woman by the name of Sushi Uchiha was assigned a very top secret mission that would take her far behind enemy lines. Due to the classified nature of this mission only Sushi was to know about exactly what her orders were. The possibly of leaking information was kept to a minimum for if anyone outside the village were to find out a war would be imminent. The orders were given and Sushi returned to the once lively Uchiha section of the village hidden in the leaf. As morning arrived Sushi Uchiha was no where to be found as her mission was already underway. It was early morning and Sushi was at the boarder of the Iwagakure no Sato. He mission was to eliminate the surrounding patrol without being discovered and as swiftly as possible. However as she killed off two of the patrol she failed to realized that one had gone missing and she was ambushed from behind and mortally wounded with a dagger piercing her lung. The blow was not an instant kill and Sushi fought back diligently for her life and the clash ended in her victory. As she patched her wounds as best she could she pressed forward to Iwagakure no Sato village with her life hanging by a thread she collapses at the front gate to the village as a small pool of blood began to form. At the verge of death Sushi Uchiha blacked out. Hours later and Sushi is still alive. Her wounds were so great she would certainly be dead if it were not for someone assisting her. It was then that Sushi realized she was being carried by someone. They held her with care and were warm as she drifted back and forth from life and death. When she awoke from a 5 day coma she jolted up to her feet and looked around frantically. Sushi was in a strange house with no relocation as to her location. She sat down on the bed as she heard a noise in the hall and waited for what she expects to be ninja's to interrogate her. She was shocked when a handsome man opened the door and asked in a caring tone if everything is ok. Sushi was speechless as the man introduced himself as Kuuhaku, Sake. The two began to talk as they grew closer and closer over the next few days. A few months later and Sushi has kept her Uchiha heritage a secret for the fear of the man she now calls her husband leaving her. However she has decided to finally tell him the truth as she laid on her death bed pregnant with their child. She has kept her internal wounds a secret for fear of losing the baby during any healing sessions. Now just before she gives birth she hold Kuuhaku Sake's hand and mutters the words "I love you, raise our child well." As the child was born Sushi Uchiha passed away due to internal bleeding. Sake held his child as a single tear ran down his face. He promised he would care for there son till he was no longer able. Little did he know that would only be until the child Kuuhaku, Ryoushi tenth birthday. Sake was the best father any kid could have asked for. He tough him everything her knew before he entered the academy to give him an edge against the other students. On Ryoushi tenth birthday his father gave him a kiss on his forehead and told him about his mother. He told him everything from how they met and that he carries the blood of an Uchiha. Sake rested his head on his sons' head and told him that he had to be strong for him mom and dad and no matter what happened they loved him very much. Ryoushi smiled as he held back his tears knowing that it would be the last time he would see his father for he was going on a suicide mission. Ryoushi said goodbye to his father for the last time in front of the Iwagakure no Sato academy. Thanks to his father Sake's training Ryoushi passed the academy with flying colors at the top of his class and was graduated at the age of 13. During the three years between Ryoushi graduating and now he has been keeping to himself and training in silence before he started tackling mission given to him by the the leader of the village. He is at the age of 16 and he is ready to start taking on mission in order to rank up and become one of the strongest ninjas in the village. And though Ryoushi is proud of his Uchiha blood he hides the fact just as his mother did to prevent tension in the village.
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The Fallen One
Posts : 42 Join date : 2010-08-29 Location : DivineFrost Closet.
| Subject: Re: Ryoushi Kuuhaku- Iwagakure no Sato Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:54 am | |
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Ahira Head of Moderators
Posts : 335 Join date : 2010-08-04 Age : 37 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Ryoushi Kuuhaku- Iwagakure no Sato Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:22 pm | |
| Three things:
1) In the section involving Karma, Renown and Alignment, you need to put "0" for Karma, "True Neutral" for Alignment, and "0" for Renown.
2) Did you PM Lyte letting him know you were making an Uchiha character? If not, you may want to do that.
3) Lastly, you need to have your jutsu listed. The three jutsu that an E-Ranked Genin may start out with are: Henge, Bunshin, and Kawarimi.
Please make the necessary changes and I will look over this again to be approved. | |
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The Fallen One
Posts : 42 Join date : 2010-08-29 Location : DivineFrost Closet.
| Subject: Re: Ryoushi Kuuhaku- Iwagakure no Sato Mon Aug 30, 2010 6:12 pm | |
| I messaged Lyte, and all fixed. | |
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Ahira Head of Moderators
Posts : 335 Join date : 2010-08-04 Age : 37 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Ryoushi Kuuhaku- Iwagakure no Sato Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:02 pm | |
| All right, just a couple of things:
1) Please link the clan page to the bloodline. If you don't know how to do this, I will be happy to show you.
2) And on your jutsu total, put "3."
Other than that, this looks good enough to me. Fix this and I'll approve. | |
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The Fallen One
Posts : 42 Join date : 2010-08-29 Location : DivineFrost Closet.
| Subject: Re: Ryoushi Kuuhaku- Iwagakure no Sato Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:04 pm | |
| I don't know how to do that if you could please show me. (I figured it out just waiting for approval)
(Fixed:Jutsu is at 3) | |
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Mitsuomi Sensui Head of Storyline
Posts : 238 Join date : 2010-08-12 Age : 37 Location : You Wish
| Subject: Re: Ryoushi Kuuhaku- Iwagakure no Sato Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:34 pm | |
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