Lyte
Posts : 89 Join date : 2010-08-01 Age : 32 Location : California
| Subject: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:29 am | |
| Name: Finn Adventure Alias: The Little Hero Age: 6 Gender: Male Height: 4’01 Weight: 78lbs Appearance: - Spoiler:
Race: Caucasian Hair: Blonde Eyes: Goldenrod Body: Little Ethnicity: Ame no Kuni Personality: Finn is a brave little boy, who would do anything to help out someone. Although he is only 6, he has a very big heart and can’t wait to experience the world. He is a bit stubborn at times, and though most call him “cute” he is a very sweet boy indeed. Being a "little Hero" Finn is up for any task, no matter how small or how large. Of course though, he is only 6 so of course hes not ognna do something like fight the 9 tailed fox head on, he would most likely cry at that, but the point is Finn is brave for his age. He is always up for adventure and loves to meet new people and make new friends. Unlike most his age, Finn wont hide behind someone and point and stare, rather, Finn would more likely go investigate than sit and hide. Village: Kirigakure Title: Genin Special Titles:Missing Ninja Class: Karma:0 Alignment:True Neutral Renown: 0
Rank: E Experience Points: 0 Bloodline:N/A Element: SuitonFighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu Master, Taijutsu Secondary Sub Fighting style:Inventory:
- A Big Leaf
- Plastic Sword
- Strange Rusty Blade
Kekkai Genkai:- Spoiler:
Name: Mermaid/Merman Requirements: Water as first element, Given at character creation, My permission (Since PM’s are my friend). Description: A inborn trait that has caused many sea fairing men to go off in search for these “creatures” that appear as half woman half fish, and lose their own lives in the process, it is as real as they had hoped if only in a more sinister fashion. The first thing that one with this ability has is the ability to have their legs, merge together forming that of a fish tail, giving them unparalleled speed within water, allowing for them to match high speeds of other sea creatures, the drawback being they are fairly clumsy on land even when using their “human” legs. This only applies to female’s as males have the ability to have webs appear in-between their toes and fingers as well as gain other more personal fish like appendages, allowing for them all around speed within water that still rivals that of the fishtailed mermaids. They can also breath underwater through their own lungs, allowing them to be within the water as though they were on land, and being water doesn’t affect any of their senses, in addition their bodies are adjusted to all forms of water pressure, making sea depths possible, in addition to them being immune to temperature change. This ability also allows one with it to communicate in ways that are influential to others, using hidden sound waves within their voices, making what they say more believable/have a calling sort of vibe to their speech, though it doesn’t affect one as much as you might think if they are aware of the situation. In addition to this one with this ability has a stronger ability to control water, and as such all of their water jutsu’s strength’s are boosted by one rank of their highest level, while costing one rank less in chakra to perform,(No this does not mean S rank can be SS rank, as S rank is the highest, nor does it mean E rank costs nothing as it still costs E rank.) however in exchange they cannot have ration as an element as it would counter balance their own chakra system in the way it performs, nor may they have Katon for the same reason.
Name: Poseidon’s Majesty Requirements: Suiton becomes first element, No element besides Suiton/elements that are related to Suiton, Gained at character creation, no bloodline, Second stage is 30 SP training. Description: An ability that very few have been known to have over the many years that humanity has been upon the earth, or at least for as long as they have bothered to keep track of such things. This ability is much like a inborn trait that takes over the nature of one’s elemental chakra, and body’s make up to the point where they feel as though they are within the very life blood of the planet itself. This in essence allows them to assimilate with the very element of water. This changes their outward appearance somewhat making their eyes match the seas very color. The assimilation of the water around them is done via their bodies coming into contact with the water around them, allowing them to join with it, and control any, and all water within connection range of their own water that they have created or has manifested via a means other than chakra, Allowing them to avoid damage, and such via the manifesting into the water around them. It also allows for them to slowly create more water from the air around them, using the condensation within the air. This ability also allows one with it to learn Suiton jutsu as though they were one style point higher in that area, for the obvious price of having no other elements usable. Combat Styles:- Spoiler:
Bloodline Limits:N/A Jutsu Total: Basics: All E Rank: 0 D Rank: 0 C Rank: 0 B Rank: 0 A Rank: 0 S Rank: 0 Jutsus:Basic Jutsu - Spoiler:
•Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E (Basic) Requirements: None Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. However, it does not grant one the properties of said objects or skills of that person, meaning turning into a weapon will not allow you to cut an opponent and turning into a dog will not give you a great sense of smell. This technique can also be used in conjunction with someone, who may a person, a pet or a summoning creature, in which case it is called Konbi Henge (Combination Transformation). However, its principles remain the same.
•Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E (Basic) Requirements: None Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
•Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Body Substitution Technique Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E (Basic) Requirements: None Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Naturally, it won't work with another person unless their skill gap is enormous, and the object to replace oneself with must be close in size and weight to the ninja themselves. This technique must be set up a little ahead when fighting skilled opponents, otherwise, you may end up getting struck because you wouldn't have enough time to use it.
•Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill Type: Taijutsu Rank: D (Basic) Requirements: None Description: A very basic skill, without which a shinobi would become the laughing stock of the village. It allows them to escape ropes and similar simple restraints. However, advanced knots and heavier restraints than a simple rope may be too much for a basic skill like this to handle.
•Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C (Basic Requirements: None Description: A skill that every self-respecting shinobi must have. It is based on concentrating chakra to the soles of one's feet and using it to stick to objects, which would allow one to walk on vertical surfaces and even upside down. This is also often used as chakra control training, since the soles of the feet are said to be the hardest place to control your chakra.
•Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B (Basic) Requirements: Kinobori Description: A more advanced technique than Kinobori, it allows one to walk on water or other similar liquid or amorphous objects. It is used in a similar fashion to its predecessor, but the shinobi must also release a constant flow of chakra into the water to keep themselves on its surface. It is often used as advanced chakra control training, since it takes the same basic concept as tree climbing technique and kicks it up a notch.
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E-D Rank: C Rank: B Rank: A Rank: S Rank:
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E-D Rank: C Rank: B Rank: A Rank: S Rank:
TaiJutsu - Spoiler:
E-D Rank: C Rank: B Rank: A Rank: S Rank: Missions Completed:
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Background: Finn is a very young boy, and as such he hasn’t experienced much. However, when Finn was born, it was a bit of a tragic story. His mother, A very kind women, had sadly died giving birth to him, and his father, out of pure sorrow and loneliness ended his own life leaving Finn all alone at a very young age. He was only around 3 months old when his father died, so he doesn’t remember either of them at all. He was raised by a very kind girl named Minato who still sees him from time to time to check up on him. Normally, Finn is seen by the ocean as he has a very deep and misunderstood connection with it. It seems that whenever he is around water, Finn always gets more calm, and his eyes turn a deep blue. However, this is the magic of Finn. One night while playing on the Beach, Finn decided to go for a swim. He willed his way into the water, fearlessly, and submerged. Surprised being able to see, he could also breath underwater and as such Finn is a very successful swimmer. He was able to move his body to do amazing thing with it, even being able to combine himself with the very ocean itself. While under the sea that night, Finn found a very strange object. It was a small rusted sword that had the word's "Poseidon’s Anguish" on the side. He kept the blade, hopefully being able to make it useful one day. Ever since that day, Finn has always been seen around the water, and doesn’t go anywhere without that little blade. Aside from this, however, Finn has been known to be a very skilled shinobi at his young age. Although he is only 6, he has already graduated from the Ninja academy, learning all the basics and earning himself the title of Genin. When he was in the academy however, surprisingley, no one made fun of Finn for his young age, however, he did seem to remain alone, and although he tried, he didnt make very many friends. Now, though, Finn travels around the village of Kiri, with not a worry in his mind, or a care in the world. The life of Finn, is a sweet one.
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The Canadian Site Owner
Posts : 668 Join date : 2010-07-28 Age : 33 Location : The Great White North
| Subject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy Tue Aug 24, 2010 11:31 am | |
| Profiles Fine, is the blade approved? | |
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Ahira Head of Moderators
Posts : 335 Join date : 2010-08-04 Age : 37 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:52 pm | |
| The blade hasn't been applied for and there are a couple of discrepancies in this profile I must address:
1) I know it's cute and all, but could you please change the subject heading of this thread to the character's actual name? You can place sayings and whatnot in the description box below the title subject.
2) I would like to know how he became a Genin at 6 years old. Unless otherwise stated in your background, I don't see it likely that Finn is on par in skills with Itachi. And since I'm to assume that because there are no jutsu listed for him - not even the basics - that he has not even attended the Academy yet.
Fix these changes and I'll be happy to look over this again. | |
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Lyte
Posts : 89 Join date : 2010-08-01 Age : 32 Location : California
| Subject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:08 pm | |
| Editted, and the blade, as of now, is nothing more than a rusty old katana blade, but with some plot, along with a time skip to make him around 17, you will come to find out what he makes of the blade and Ill apply for it then. | |
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Ahira Head of Moderators
Posts : 335 Join date : 2010-08-04 Age : 37 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy Wed Aug 25, 2010 2:45 pm | |
| All right, well I don't see anything wrong with this profile. Though I hope that he doesn't get into a tussle with any other Genin in any other village. XD
What do you think, partner? | |
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The Canadian Site Owner
Posts : 668 Join date : 2010-07-28 Age : 33 Location : The Great White North
| Subject: Re: Finn Adventure-Kiri Miracle Boy Wed Aug 25, 2010 5:39 pm | |
| Solid, interesting character, look forward to seeing the RP
In other words.
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