Mako Enhanced SOLDIERS

Name: Mako Energy
Requirements: Obtained at character creation or 4 point training thread/Admin Permission
Description: Mako energy is energy taken straight from the planet through an unknown method. Scientists around the world began performing experiments, exposing people to Mako in order to create an enhanced soldier. At first, most people died from this exposure until they finally found the right amount, method, and optimal subjects. Not everybody can undergo this process. Some may die. One exposed to Mako energy will have amazingly bright blue eyes which actually glow. Mako energy gives the user many things. It gives them increased strength, speed, and chakra depending on their rank.

E-rank: +15% to all stats
D-rank: +25% to all stats
C-rank: +45% to all stats
B-rank: +75% to all stats
A-rank: +100% to all stats
S-rank: +125% to all stats

NOTE: To receive this ability upon character creation, you must ask for my permission as well as admin permission. To train for this ability, you need not ask permission but simply train it and an Admin and myself will decide whether you are worthy to have it. If either myself or an admin say no, you will die during the training.

Fix your coding, this had no negatives and needs to be toned down GREATLY

Not every ability has negative effects and why does it need to be toned down?

Because its a solid boost to EVERY stat. Every character would take this, they would be dumb not too.

Hm, Admin permission for requirement?

xD hell we can make it interesting. Admin permission if someone wants this at character creation and if they want to train it, an Admin decides if they live or die from the experiment. Sound good?

Alright, but lower all of there boost to match a 100% at S Rank
It does make you twice as strong as you should be.

But not everyone gets S-rank, remember? S-rank is a privilege so they should also get a privilege and get above a double increase. Most people will only get to A-rank

So make S 125%?

S rank isn't a privilege, anyone can earn it I made sure of that when I wrote the system you guys are using, and this needs some kind of downside.... otherwise this could be combo'd with everything and be strong, and I know the purpose is to combo but come on man there has to be a limit on how much of a boost you can get with everything, or a time limit or just that they can't focus chakra as well or anything because right now it makes them god...

Atleast someone see's my side of the fence xD

I just thought of what I could do with this and it wasn't pretty so yeah XD

Added in a post limit as well as the possible death thing

Alright, since this is so big. Ill leave it to Princess as final judgements.

Okay, I have just a couple of issues with this:

1st off, if you gain permission to use this both from an Admin and you, then that should qualify them to be able to train for it. So if their training thread sucks, you should deduct points from them being able to gain the necessary enhancements. Killing the character if they've already been granted the permission to do so seems a little extreme. XD Which leads me to my second point:

2ndly, if a character wishes to use this KG, then in order to GET your permission, as well as an Admin's permission, is to DO a training thread as a demonstration. If they show the skill, they get the KG. If they don't, then you don't give them the KG. Then they can just choose to revamp the character to fit either a different bloodline or rework the character a different way. I'm pretty partial when it comes to the character creation process and feel if the character is indeed worthy of breathing life, then they should be able to rework the character to their needs so they can play them and not worrying about whether or not they're going to croak during their training.

We get enough of worrying about dying while RPing with each other on the battlefield and during violent plots. XD

For the first part, no if you're just training, you don't ask permission at all.
And I threw in the dying part because in Final Fantasy, you have a chance of dying from it.

All right, well I guess there's a necessary risk involved then so I'll approve it.

But this better not get abused.

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