Honoo Ken

Name: Honoo Ken
Type: Nin/Tai
Rank: A
Requirements: Katon as Main element, Admin Permission
Description: Honoo Ken, or “Blaze Fist” is a technique that takes much skill to perform. After summoning fire chakra to ones fist, it utilizes the strength in one's body to combine the already fearsome power of both Katon ninjutsu and Taijutsu. Once the fire chakra is at a large enough mass, the user holds their hand at the hip and kicks off towards there target with tremendous force. Running towards the target, the user will push up and out with there Honoo Ken and strike the target.

Name: Honoo Ken-Yaiba
Type: Nin/Tai
Rank: B
Requirements: Honoo Ken, Katon as Main element, Admin Permission
Description: A variation of the Honoo Ken Technique. While activating Honoo Ken, the user will move the chakra about their hand to create a small “Blade” at the base of their fist. The appearance of the Honoo Ken Yaiba looks like the user is holding a Kunai, or other small bladed weapon, backwards, and engulfed in flames, however, the weapon of course is not there. While a bit weaker that the Honoo Ken, this move is easier to manipulate, and a bit more versatile.

Name: Susumajii Honoo Ken
Type: Nin/Tai
Rank: S
Requirements: Honoo Ken, Katon as Main element, Admin Permission
Description: The strongest variation of the Honoo Ken techniques. “Fierce Blaze Fist” as it is translated, is an understatement for the destruction this technique can cause. A much more powerful form of the Honoo Ken, requires no hand seals to perform, and is one of the strongest fire jutsu known. The user’s movement speed is increased on a greater level than that of the standard Honoo Ken, is just one of the reasons why this technique is deadly. The fire chakra used in this jutsu is said to be more in-tune with the user, and as such the color of the Honoo Ken, is the same as the users chakra, instead of the color of fire. While this technique is quite devistating, it cannot be maintained for long as it consumes a large amount of chakra to utilize.

Name: Honoo Ken-Shimizu
Type: Nin/Tai
Rank: B
Requirements: Honoo Ken, Katon as Main element, Admin Permission
Description: The Honoo Ken-Shizimu is a variation of the Honoo Ken, more veered towards defense. The technique is as strong as the amount of chakra put into it, and requires very few hand seals. After performing the required hand seals, the user will place one hand on top of the other, palms down, and thrust this towards the ground. Once done, a ring of fire appears around the user and moves up and out at very high speeds, just like a wave. While used generally for defense, this technique has also been known to be used in a pinch for offence due to the minimum amount of hand seals, and the power that can be put into it.

There should be an apostrophe in "ones" making it "one's" as the one is showing ownership. And you mean "their" not "there"

Other than that, this seems fine

Oaky, the first Jutsu is done and editted, but if you guys could leave this here for a bit longer, I have a few more Jutsu I would like to add to this.

EDIT: Okay, Ive added the jutsu and they are ready for approval.

Baahahahaha, the third technique is a no. No Handseals, Fatal, Super High Speeds.

Bahahaha

Sorry but im not moderating this, Aizen is. I just had to point out the fact I dissaprove of the jutsu, and the laugh isnt at you lyte, just at your Blazing Chidori Jet Propelled Fist of Fury.

Why would the 3rd tech be denied when its basically Raikiri but with Fire... To be honest, thats what these are, is fire based Chidori techniques.

I have to agree with Gin. 9 times out of ten fatal? Yeah, no

Omg editz

I'll leave it to Gin to approve or reject these since he started

Stop leaving everthing to me you dick! I even said you finish it cause you started!

Anyways

Quote :

"to combine the already fearsome power of an A ranked Fire jutsu, along with an A ranked Taijutsu."

Take out the rank mentions, it doesn't hit you with two A rank attacks, which is what this is implying. Just say it hits with the devestating force of nin and tai combined.

Also, third technique needs a sentence stating it consumes vast amounts of chakra.

After that your ready to go.

I left you to do it because I know you would have another problem with it when I don't.

I have faith in you Aizen! You woulda spotted em! Anyways enough clutter. Lyte is the next poster or ther'll be hell to pay!

Then concider there to be no hell. Updated.

Perfect Approved.