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| Name: Enishi Myoujin Alias: Master of Sound / Sound Sovereign Age: 23 Gender: Male Height: 6'1" Weight: 175 Ibs Appearance: - Spoiler:
Enishi has striking dark violet eyes, border lining a rich royal purple, and his dark brown hair is usually in some sort of disarray. One could call him having a chronic bed head look. When not in his Kage robes, Enishi is seen donning a black sleeveless shirt that is a semi-turtleneck in fashion and dark green cargo pants with black ninja boots. Sometimes he’ll wear his favorite jacket, but that’s if the weather permits such a thing. Every weapon he possesses is within a decent enough reach on his body, be it in any side pockets, on his belt, or on his back. Enishi isn’t one for letting his guard down, even for a moment. His skin is an even tone – a soft tan if you will – and he can be a bit vain sometimes when it comes to his looks. Race: Asian Hair: Dark Brown Eyes: Violet Body: Athletic Ethnicity: Rice Field Country Personality: Enishi is a pretty laid back individual with a pretty good sense of humor. He's all about fun and games and doesn't really mind so much if the other is offended so long as he gets a good laugh out of the deal. When it comes to being the social butterfly, you can count on Enishi to be the life of the party. He doesn't exactly stick with one clique, but he floats in and out of people's lives like the wind. Perhaps that's why he's so damn good at getting the information he wants out of whoever he wants and when he wants it from them. After all, not many suspect Enishi of anything than just being the sweet, funny, and sarcastic "Mr. Popular." However, what people don't know is that behind that laid back and relaxing exterior ticks the ever working brain of a genius mastermind who can weave into the lives of anyone he damn well pleases and can erase and manipulate things from a person's identity as though it were like taking candy from a baby...with his eyes closed! The Tsuchikage is truly a force to be reckoned with and he doesn’t play around when it comes to his title or his country. Enishi, though he's constantly smiling, the moment that his smile does disappear, you can bet your life that something serious is about to go down and either a few options are left open to you: Run like hell...beg for forgiveness...or prepare yourself for death. Those are the only options left open to you, and the only advice someone could give you at that point is to make your choice as quickly as possible lest he make the choice for you. And trust me when I say that it'll usually end up in your doom if Enishi is the one choosing. As far as relationships are concerned, the Earth Shadow isn't trying to find anything too long-term or serious right now because he's enjoying his work and his youth. Nothing beyond the one-night stands or binge festival hook-ups is something he wishes to cart around, deeming it as just excess baggage. And if it's one thing that Enishi can not stand...it's excess baggage. Be damned if he's gonna be stuck carrying that shit around. But, if you're looking for a drinking partner or someone to just sit back and play some music with (or hell, even smoking from a pipe under the shade of trees), then Enishi's definitely your kinda guy. Village: Iwagakure no Sato Title: Tsuchikage Special Titles: Missing Ninja Class: N/A Karma: 0 Alignment: Chaotic Good Renown: 1500
Rank: Kage Experience Points: 1,500 Bloodline: N/A Element: Ototon, Futon, KatonFighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu [Master] / Taijutsu [secondary] Sub Fighting style: Ototon Element Master Inventory:
- Seal Scrolls x2 (containing): Kunai x30 – each with exploding tags attached to them, Poison Senbon x30 – each with exploding tags attached to them
- Senbon x30
- Shuriken x30
- Fuuma Shuriken x1
- Melody Bracelet x1
- Tanto x1
- Kodachi x1
- 50ft Wire
- Bells x5
- Flute of Destruction
- Chaos Violin x1
Kekkei Genkai: - Spoiler:
Name: Alignment Requirements: None Description: Alignment is the representation of the power gained and lost through interactions as a Shinobi. The bonuses are passive and stack with any ability. Only one is active at a time, completely dependent on your Karma Score. (You go with whichever puts you closer to the min/max, 75 = 80, etc) +100 Karma: 25% Bonus Speed, Strength, One-handed Seals +80 Karma: 25% Bonus Speed +50 Karma: 15% Bonus Speed +25 Karma: No Bonus 0 Karma: 10% Bonus to All Attributes -25 Karma: No Bonus -50 Karma: 15% Bonus Strength -80 Karma: 25% Bonus Strength -100 Karma: 25% Bonus Strength, Speed, One-handed Seals Combat Styles:Bloodline Limits: N/A Jutsu Total: 23 Jutsus: Basic/Non-Ranked Jutsu- Spoiler:
- Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E (Basic) Requirements: None Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy.The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.
- Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E (Basic) Requirements: None Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. However, it does not grant one the properties of said objects or skills of that person, meaning turning into a weapon will not allow you to cut an opponent and turning into a dog will not give you a great sense of smell.
This technique can also be used in conjunction with someone, who may be a person, a pet or a summoning creature, in which case it is called Konbi Henge (Combination Transformation). However, its principles remain the same.
- Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Body Substitution Technique
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: E (Basic) Requirements: None Description: Kawarimi no Jutsuis a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute them self with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. Naturally, it won't work with another person unless their skill gap is enormous, and the object to replace oneself with must be close in size and weight to the ninja themselves. This technique must be setup a little ahead when fighting skilled opponents, otherwise, you may end up getting struck because you wouldn't have enough time to use it.
- Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Requirements: None Description: A skill that every self-respecting shinobi must have. It is based on concentrating chakra to the soles of one's feet and using it to stick to objects, which would allow one to walk on vertical surfaces and even upside down. This is also often used as chakra control training, since the soles of the feet are said to be the hardest place to control your chakra.
- Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Requirements: Kinobori Description: A more advanced technique than Kinobori, it allows one to walk on water or other similar liquid or amorphous objects. It is used in a similar fashion to its predecessor, but the shinobi must also release a constant flow of chakra into the water to keep themselves on its surface. It is often used as advanced chakra control training, since it takes the same basic concept as tree climbing technique and kicks it up a notch. D-Rank Jutsu (Not Basic) - Spoiler:
- Name: Fukuwajutsu (Ventriloquism)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D-Rank Requirements: Ototon as primary element Description: The user concentrates on the chakra within, and along the mouth. As they do this the user transmits a few words and uses their sound release to where the sound does not come forth. As the user does this the words are "thrown" out. This allows them throw their voice or move any sounds they can make with their mouth to any location without the sound fading. If by chance the user is capable of noticing or knowing the exact location of an ear, the user is capable of whispering the message into their ear.
- Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Requirements: None Description: Shunshin no Jutsuis a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist,sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance. While it may seem like the user simply appeared or disappeared, the technique is actually a momentary increase in movement speed towards a set location.
C-Rank Jutsu- Spoiler:
- Name: Sonar
Type: Supplementary Ninjutsu Rank: D-C-Ranked Requirements: Ototon as primary element Description: The user performs the need hand seals. From there, the user emits 3,very low pitched sound waves (via voice or weapon). The sound travels very quickly in a 360 degree radius. The low pitched sound bounces off various objects with the area and returns to the user to interpret. With this done, the user can pin point enemy movement and location infractions of a second. The draw back to this that the sound wave only travels in a flat line until a C-rank is attained. The user begins with 10 meters distance, increasing 20 Meters every time learned. After50 meters, Training is moved to a C-Rank, which then allows the user to emit the sound wave in all three dimensions. Every time learned in C-ranked increase the distance to 25 meters, With a maximum of 150meters.
- Name: Oto Shouheki (sound Barrier)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D-C-Ranks Requirements: Ototon as primary element Description: While holding the ox hand seal, the user emits a very low pitched sound. The sound waves are large and effect air pressure. Incoming projectiles bend away and are steered off course, effectively missing their target. The large sound waves only travel a short distance(D-rank= 6 feet, C-rank= 16 feet)
- Name: Himei no Jutsu (Shriek)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C-Rank Requirements: Ototon as primary element Description: This technique has three separate tiers for both the opponent and the user. Depending on the very range of the attack and where the opponent is what matters for this type of technique. The user's difficulty class is what separates the magnitude of the attack as well. The technique has a range of twenty meters for the basic D Class Ninja. When the user opens up their mouth they concentrate on the very vocal chords of their throat and push forth in all directions a massive scream capable of great damage is thrown out. For every difficulty class the range increases by five meters with a maximum of forty meters for S Class. For any opponent that is within one third of distance from the user the opponent is unable to hear for three posts, feels nauseous for two posts, and can mot move for one post. For any opponent that is within two thirds distance from the user the opponent is unable to hear for two posts, feels nauseous for one post. For any opponent that is within three thirds distance from the user the opponent is unable to hear for one post. No matter what Class the user is in the user is unable to hear for three posts.
- Name: Ixeroborero (Yellow Bolero)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C-Rank Requirements: Ototon as primary element Description: The user plays a fast paced tune that expresses anger and anxiety. At will, the user may launch from the instrument a wave of sound that can rip through the ground with ease. It begins the size of the instrument and grows slowly, beginning exceedingly fast but rapidly slowing as the wave increases with size. Once it reaches about 20 feet, the wave becomes too large and weak to sustain, and dissipates. This song is written to overlap "Gray Waltz" well.
- Name: Grueenbu (Gray Waltz)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C-Rank Requirements: Ototon as primary element Description: The user plays a slow, background-like dance melody that creates multiple images of themselves. They are not illusions, though they cannot be touched. Made of sound, the only thing they can do is relay sound-based Jutsu through themselves from their creator. This song is written to be a background tune for "Yellow Bolero."
- Name: Kurozokyoku (Black Ballad)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C-Rank Requirements: N/A Description: A song that begins sounding innocent, then sharply becomes dramatic, then sorrowful, while slowly becoming peaceful and surreal is played by the user. It hypnotizes them into thinking they have nothing to loose, and they become fearless and bloodthirsty. This effectively increases their endurance (as they believe they cannot feel pain) and their strength and speed (because of the powerful adrenaline rush, complete with blood lust and anger) while altering their attitude. This song is one of the hardest Song Arts to use, as it requires deep memorization in order to continue playing it flawlessly while enraged. The user feels the song flow through them, however, making it harder for them to forget about it and easier to concentrate on. B-Rank Jutsu- Spoiler:
- Name: Himei (Shriek Blast)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B-Rank Requirements: Bo-karu Koukyoukyoku Chishiki B Rank, Ototon as primary element Description: The user builds up chakra in their vocal cords and releases it in a single packet, sending a powerful blast of sound at the opponent. It can break through C Ranked defenses, Doton techniques, and causes internal damage through resonance if it strikes the opponent.
- Name: Katon: Hibashiri - Running Fire
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Requirements: None Description: This is a fire element ninjutsu that requires no hand seals. By focusing their fire natured chakra, the shinobi can create jets of fire that will run along the ground towards their opponent. Unfortunately, redirecting the movement of said fire trails if an opponent evades is quite difficult. While this technique requires no hand seals, it isn't as strong as most fire ninjutsu of the same level.
- Name: Auditory Comprehension
Type: Supplementary Ninjutsu Rank: B-rank Requirements: Automatically gained once the user has knowledge of 25 TP of Sound Release techniques. Description: A sound releases user has experienced many different types and used many different types of sound. At this point, hearing and interpreting sound becomes second hand. The user can now interpret sounds heard, rather then just hearing them, deciphering what type of sound is made,location, etc. The user must train to understand the different types of sound made, listed below.
A-Rank Jutsu- Spoiler:
- Name: Genjutsu Break
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Requirements: Genjutsu or Ijutsu Master at C/A rank; Genjutsu, Ijutsu or Ninjutsu Primary at B/S rank; Any at A/S rank Description: This is an advanced skill for breaking genjutsu, however, no shinobi should be without it. It allows one to break illusions without hurting themselves, does not require any hand seals and works against stronger techniques than Kai. Since every genjutsu in essence is the opponent confusing one's five senses by interfering with their chakra flow in a specific way, momentarily stopping your chakra flow completely and then reversing it, which is what this skill is about, can break theoretically any illusion. Naturally, one's skill in controlling their chakra determines how well this will work.
Allows one to break a genjutsu of S rank or below. For the lower rank characters, genjutsu of A rank or below take one whole post to break, while genjutsu of S rank take two posts. For higher rank characters, genjutsu of A and S rank take a whole post to break, while genjutsu of B rank and below take half a post. Kinjutsu genjutsu require twice as much time, though only higher rank characters can break A rank kinjutsu, and none can break S rank kinjutsu.
- Name: Futon: Kaze no Yaiba - Sword of Wind
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Requirements: None Description: This ninjutsu follows the basic principles of wind element but is different from most. It is a purely close combat technique as it creates a wind blade the size of a normal katana in the user's hand. This "sword" is very strong and cannot be blocked by a physical weapon. It can be seen by notable distortions in the air.
- Name: Oto Ketsuretsu (Sound Rupture)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A-rank Requirements: Must know at least 8 sound techs before learning, Ototon as primary element Description: The user emits an extremely large sound wave, covering 100 sq meters. The sound waves are extremely high and vibrate human cells violently. The cells continue to vibrate till the liquids within them must escape, beyond the cells membrane, literally exploding. - Those caught within1/4 of the sound waves suffer massive internal hemorrhaging on most of his/her organ, as well as bodily paralysis for 2 turns. - Those in the 2/4 range experience extreme headache/distortion/deafness and inability to move for 5 turns, with minor hemorrhaging still occurring in the organs - Any caught in the final range 3/4 range experience headache/distortion/deafness for 3 turn, with no Hemorrhaging. - Any caught in the final 4/4 range experience headache/distortion and deafness for 1 turn S-Rank Jutsu- Spoiler:
- Name: Bo-karu Koukyoukyoku Chishiki (Vocal Symphony Knowledge)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D-S-Rank Requirements: Ototon as primary element Description: This technique is the user's ability to combine their chakra with the vibrations emanating from their vocal cords, creating the unique voice techniques. In order to be able to perform a Voice technique, the user must have this technique of a corresponding rank. Thus, if they want to learn a D Rank Voice technique, they must have Bo-karu KoukyoukyokuChishiki D Rank. C Rank is required for C Rank techniques, and so on.
- Name: Inmetsu Koukyoukyoru (Destruction Symphony)
Type: Ninjutsu Rank: S-rank Requirements: Bo-karu Koukyoukyoku Chishiki S Rank, Katto Serena-do Description: The user screams, releasing a huge burst of chakra from their throat. This blast divides into any number of thin, slicing sound waves that cut the area all around the user, capable of slicing through a human like butter and cannot be stopped by any defense weaker than A Rank and no Doton technique can stop it. The sound waves cut in a fifteen meter area all around the user, in a complete sphere, meaning underground and airborne targets are also struck. The user is left drained and voiceless afterward.
- Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique/Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Multiple Shadow Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu (K) Rank: B/S Requirements: None/S rank Description: This ninjutsu technique creates multiple copies of the user. The difference it has with any other clone technique is that it creates solid copies who possess the full physical and jutsu ability of the user and they are indistinguishable from the real person by any means, since they even have the chakra circulatory system. These clones are also fully autonomous, meaning they can move however far away from the shinobi they want and not dispel. Unfortunately, they still disappear after taking a hit. This technique, while powerful, poses a risk to the user, since it splits their remaining chakra evenly between all clones and themselves. Another notable thing about this technique is that the user gains whatever knowledge their shadow clones have collected when they dispel.
Tajuu Kage Bunshin is the same as normal Kage Bunshin, only it is used to create a higher number of clones: while the basic technique is limited to a maximum of four clones, the multiple shadow clone technique can create up to two dozen clones. However, chakra is still split evenly between each copy of the user, so creating many clones may prove more harmful than beneficial.
- Name: Shuriken Bunshin no Jutsu - Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: S Type: Offense Requirement: 1 or more Shuriken A technique that multiplies a thrown Shuriken into many exact replicas of the original. Not just being an illusion but the copies all are able to do real damage and will dispel only physical contact with something. A skilled user of this technique is able to multiply the amount of Shuriken thrown x100.
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Background: Enishi Myoujin was just a simple, Rice Field Country boy years ago. He was the first born of five children. His younger brothers and sisters all looked up to him and admired him, knowing that their big brother was going to become a great shinobi someday. Their mother, Setsuka, had passed a long time ago and now there was only their sickly father, Ryunosuke, left in their life. Enishi knew he had to start training for the Ninja Academy and soon, because the sooner he graduated from there, the sooner he could start taking on missions to feed his family. They were all depending on him. Enishi’s life at the Academy was a breeze. He picked up the skills and training to become a ninja with ease and found the different jutsus to be interesting to learn. Even the history of their great ancestors was something to be admired and looked up to. In no time, Enishi was able to graduate from the Academy at age ten and continue on as a Genin. His sensei, Takamura, was a headstrong man and little irresponsible from time to time, but a good teacher. Enishi’s teammates, Aiko and Seimei, were some of the best friends he could ever have. Mission after mission was laid out before them and they took each without a moment’s hesitation. Their Chuunin and Jounin exams went off without a hitch. However, their lives would soon be parted in three separate directions as they all decided to take different paths for their careers. Aiko went back to the Ninja Academy as one of its more popular instructors while Seimei became a Medical-nin in hopes of being able to save as many lives as he could. Upon recommendation from Takamura, Enishi was trained to become the Otokage’s Anbu ninja. Seeing it as a great honor, Enishi did not decline the offer. Being an Anbu was a respectable position and pulled in a decent amount of wages. He could definitely support his family as an Anbu. - Spoiler:
For two years, Enishi would hide behind the guise of his wolf mask as the Otokage’s Anbu. He didn’t complain, despite some of the Otokage’s methods and idealism clashing with some of his own. Enishi, deep down, was a kind sort of individual and didn’t like the senseless killing that involved some of his missions. The lives of innocent people would be taken all by an order given by the Sound Shadow and there was nothing he could say against it. At least not for now. However, those closest to the Otokage could sense Enishi’s displeasure with the goings on in the world of guarding their Sound Shadow. So they sent him on a mission, a scouting mission, over to one of the neighboring countries: Earth. Though Enishi tried to protest against leaving – for the mission would take at least a month of information gathering – he could only go home to pack his things and say farewell to his family. He promised them that he would return soon. Iwagakure welcomed Enishi into their fold, believing him to be nothing more than a stray ninja looking for a place to call home. He gathered the information regarding the gates to the village, the layout of the land outside the village, and who all the important people were within. He even made a few friends there, believing them to be long-term comrades that he would ask for help someday and they him. Once his mission had been completed, Enishi returned to Otogakure. However, instead of reporting to the Otokage right away, he went straight to his home near the outskirts of the village to tell his family that he’d returned. What awaited him there was something he was not expecting and would forever change the course of the path that Enishi was currently walking. Ryunosuke, his father, and his younger siblings: Ginza, Yoko, Tomaru, Satsuki, and Benitora…they were all dead. Killed in a ferocious slaughter inside their home. His younger brother, Ginza, was holding a dagger in his hand. He had been trying to protect everyone from harm. But their opponent was too much for them. After burying his family, Enishi reported this crime to the Otogakure and the rest of his Anbu. However, instead of being outraged, the Sound Shadow merely smirked his dark smile and glowered at his “wolf” Anbu. “You only have yourself to blame,” he said, his voice cold and unfeeling. “If you had not been so set against my way of doing things, your family would still be alive. This is merely karma paying you back for your unfaithfulness in your Kage.” And in that instant, Enishi was attacked on all sides by the Kage’s Anbu ninja. In that moment, Enishi Myoujin became a Missing-nin and fought for his life to reach the borders of Rice Field Country, escaping back into Iwagakure. Otogakure didn’t want to risk war with Earth Country just yet, so they bade their time and let him go. They no longer saw Enishi as a threat. Another year passed – a year of planning, a year of honing skills, a year of filling Enishi’s heart with one desire: vengeance. Thanks to the help from his friends in Iwagakure, after hearing his story, helped him out as much as possible. But like Otogakure, they could not actively help for fear of starting a war with the Sound Country. He just needed them to help him sneak back into the country undetected. Enishi would take care of the rest. And take care of the rest he did. Once outside the Kage’s quarters, Enishi announced himself. However, the Anbu didn’t have time to react. He was already destroying the front door and had killed several of his former comrades before even making it to the main room of the building. There, before him, was the Otokage surrounded by several of his most powerful Anbu. Had the situation been different and it was another intruder, Enishi could have counted himself amongst that rank by the Otokage’s side. But not today. Not today, nor ever. Two coups would be implemented that night… A Coup de Grace. In a fell swoop, Enishi killed the Otokage. Once the kage was dead, the other Anbu halted as Enishi spoke. “I’m the new Kage of Otogakure. Attack and I will destroy you all.” A Coup de Tas.In no time, Enishi was able to establish himself as the leader of Otogakure. However, though his reign was a non-violent one, the thought of being in his home country did not sit well with him. Not after his family was so ruthlessly slaughtered. The memories were too much. So after deciding who would become Otokage in his place, Enishi left Rice Field Country and set out for Iwagakure. During his time there, with Kuronuei by his side, Enishi was able to climb up in ranks until he established himself as newly appointed Tsuhikage. For the past four years things have gone smoothly and no one has dared rise against him. Though he is a somewhat benevolent ruler, the Tsuchikage does not allow for his authority to be challenged. Peace and tranquility would be upheld and his ends always justified his means.
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| | | Lady Chemical Co-Owner
Posts : 195 Join date : 2010-07-29 Age : 32 Location : Unknown lol
| Subject: Re: Enishi Myoujin - Tsuchikage Sun Aug 08, 2010 1:12 pm | |
| O.O I like ^.^ I'm under the assumption that this is a character from the other site? | |
| | | Hittori
Posts : 22 Join date : 2010-08-06 Age : 28 Location : The Skies of God
| Subject: Re: Enishi Myoujin - Tsuchikage Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:48 pm | |
| Very original...The Sound element, one where the implication of sound devices are not a factor. I must say they are quite the double edge sword but at the same time I can't help but feel there is a bit of moderation that you may need to do in terms of this (just a friendly suggestion) I figured I'd help you adjust this a little so the admins give you no complains because I'm sure they must have come to the same conclusion I did after reading your jutsu once through. 1st please explain to me exactly what a Chaos Violin, Kodachi, and Flute of destruction is since I have no recollection of seeing any of this in the item cache, maybe I must not have checked too thoroughly. And being that they are named and not simple items I really would like to know if there is anything special about them since they have names and whatever..I think I speak for all role player when I say that not explaining something like that means it could be abused. Also I'm not sure if this was an unwritten rule but I noticed that quite a few members seem to have jutsu not listed or requested to be approved in their arsenal, I dunno if you were personally able to request this stuff but to me it seems a little bias..I mean the reason they are placed up for everyone's sight is so that other characters have fair gain to learn it if they wish right?..I mean even the ones that say " My permission" they at least say that to let you guys know who wants to use some of your beautiful works of art right ^^. In saying this I would at least assume that you have taken the decency to post a request to have Ototon as a element, I'm sure the admins will have no problem honoring your request also it would make sense to place your double edged jutsu in that section. 2nd I seem to have a little situation with this one - Spoiler:
Name: Sonar Type: Supplementary Ninjutsu Rank: D-C-Ranked Requirements: Ototon as primary element Description: The user performs the need hand seals. From there, the user emits 3,very low pitched sound waves (via voice or weapon). The sound travels very quickly in a 360 degree radius. The low pitched sound bounces off various objects with the area and returns to the user to interpret. With this done, the user can pin point enemy movement and location infractions of a second. The draw back to this that the sound wave only travels in a flat line until a C-rank is attained. The user begins with 10 meters distance, increasing 20 Meters every time learned. After50 meters, Training is moved to a C-Rank, which then allows the user to emit the sound wave in all three dimensions. Every time learned in C-ranked increase the distance to 25 meters, With a maximum of 150meters.
The main issue I can see with this jutsu regardless of what level it is, is it allows you to track an enemy movement meaning, that in this sense means your basically able to always be aware of an ambush no matter who is coming, also it means you can ambush anyone unsuspectingly including a kage. Since everyone no matter how good in the art of stealth, will make a sound in a movement even as little as swaying the wind in nostril breathing. Now I can see where something like this could be useful if there was an aerial viewer contacting you in the motions of your opponent(s), but it must be considered like this, in cases of Ninja to Ninja combat, an opponent is able to expect the unexpected if they at least notice your tracker seeing them. For Anbu or high level ninja who exploit the opponents blind spot, a jutsu like yours in the instant set up for an auto hit, for characters like Sosuke Aizen's Satoshi, if he was to use this (Not saying he can) someone else's character will be dead before they even know what happened and it cannot be logically written for a counter. Other than that I suggest that the Admins may need to actually conference with you one on one with each of your sound techniques that involve damage to the opponent since it is literally impossible to dodge/block sound so long as chakra controls it, even if you place blind spots among the jutsu that seem logical if someone who uses master chakra control gets their hands on some of the attacks I've read they can be cunning and insure that every last hit connects without fail. I recommend when making a request for the Ototon style you make sure and place a bit more restrictions on the sound attacks, enough restrictions that it is virtually impossible to abuse without breaking the jutsu rules. Thats all I can say from a friendly rper to rper suggestion. | |
| | | Lady Chemical Co-Owner
Posts : 195 Join date : 2010-07-29 Age : 32 Location : Unknown lol
| Subject: Re: Enishi Myoujin - Tsuchikage Sun Aug 08, 2010 5:56 pm | |
| Wow Hittori very good point but she did make a request for this element i am going to look it over now, but i can see why you think a certain jutsu there would be a tad overpowered..But yeah lets see how the others judge it okay. | |
| | | The Canadian Site Owner
Posts : 668 Join date : 2010-07-28 Age : 33 Location : The Great White North
| Subject: Re: Enishi Myoujin - Tsuchikage Sun Aug 08, 2010 10:01 pm | |
| Guys if a Jutsu is approved you complain in the questions thread, not on their profile. She has to constantly activate sonar to know whats going on anyways, if she doesnt say it in RP IT DIDNT HAPPEN
Anyways the profile looks nice, and once all the Ototon stuff is looked over by Princess she'll get you on the right path.
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